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[-=STEALTH=- [X-MAS]]

um, why are two of these the same?

both this 1 and the new X-MAS one you just submitted are the same! I hope you're not entering both because on only changed the graphic on the box/present,,, I would blow the whistle on the other one because it's still in judgment but I'll give you a break and be checking back later making sure one of them is gone,,, or only one is in the contest,,,

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Axlenz-FlashElite responds:

Yeah only one will be in the contest. The first one isnt christmas related, the second one is. Soon it will be switched! Wait till tomorrow!

[Down The Chimeny!]

too basic, not very forgiving

it's really really basic and I didn't find much of a point to this game,,, you should have made it so you need to controll the guy with arrows and maybe make it harder and more forgiving (the rock didn't even touch my guy and I died apparently) speed is SO slow and that makes it boring, you need to make it more fast paced and more exciting with more of a goal! Noticed you're in the contest, good luck,,,

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Skeik responds:

and I wonder if you even read the directions.

[A Random Generator]

limited

it was very limited but then again most generators are,,, "the bench growled at the bench" you should try avoiding using the same word in different sections,,, can lead to flaws like that,,,, the word generator was creative but pretty much a waste seing as there was only 3 and 4 letter words being generated,,, good try, but it's been done too,,,

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[Osiris II]

games don't get much better

you really have some amazing scripting here! I love the level creator and the fact that theres so many high detail levels! it takes alot to make a game this complex! I appreciate the work you obviously put into this! Great game and I hope to see more from you!!

5/5
10/10

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ChromeShark responds:

Thanks a lot for the review. It was pretty complex making the level creator, but it's something I can use again so I'm sure it will pay off. You'll definitely be seeing more from me, as well as Osiris III next summer I have another game planned for early 2007.

[Snow Ball Joe]

well, it was good but i had one problem

you really rushed your way through making the backgrounds, you could have at least smoothed it out,,, it puts a good script to shame when you use bad gfx,,, I noticed you're in the armor games contest, it really needs more work to win,,,, good luck tho, my game will be out soon and it uses a similar script as yours, it's a rock climbing game,,,

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[BLIZZARD before CHRISTMAS]

nice little game

well made, fun to play, good working scoreboards, yet under-rated, it's the best game in the contest so far, but score puts it in last :( good luck, my game will be submitted sometime this week or this weekend hopefully :)

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FlashBurgerHelper responds:

thanks,
i know what you mean, my timing for sumbiting it was bad, it only had about 500 veiws before it was off the 50 most recent, but alas, this at least isnt my real game for the contest this is just a test for my scoreboard so all is fine :) i'll look out for ur game, good luck in the contest :)

[Paper-Plane Wishlist]

hmm, long, very simple, not much too it

I found that it takes forever to get to the north pole in this game, and at first I thought I was doing something wrong cuz the bottom bar wasn't moving, then I saw it move a tick and I was like wow this might take a while, then I died and gave up, great game, but it needs work, my suggestions would be make a ground, that makes you feel like you are actually flying somewhere instead of just floating having random objects flying at you, background doesn't move either, thats why I found it rather boring, good luck in the contest tho,,,,

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[Flying Klaus]

umm, was this made in flash?

this definatly wasn't made in flash, but the graphics fit nicely in if you programmed it in flash, it was good, and i noticed you're in the contest for armor games, good luck, my game will be submitted soon too ^.^

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[Playing Field 2]

quite the script

you got a really intense script going on here! I love it how it's 3D ish and everything, how the hand disappears behind the trees as you move further back, very nice, great job, and btw, how much did cmg pay you for this? I want to know cuz I'm thinking of submitting a new game of mine to them soon...

good job!

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[MJ Dance Machine]

was alright,,, alot like my ideas

not saying you copied me, but it was ALOT like my two napolean dance dance games (which sucked) but if you want a small tip, make the buttons either press or rollover or use the key codes to better control the people, and make the moves spread out over more time, and improve the look of the stage/buttons, it'll do alot better if you do these things,,,, actually i noticed a few spots on the actual dancer, like a small dot that you didn't erase... hope this helps

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