PARAGON-pvp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awesome Cracks Down]

ahhhhahaha

Man I loved the easter egg, that shit was bomb.
And it's true everyone played this game, wasted a good amount of time playing it when I should have been studying when it first came out,,,, FML....

well done 10/10

[Cornbread Samurai]

really funny man

really like your style in humor! definite ++ in score

only real thing i could tell you guys to improve is, the characters need to move around more, gesticulate a bit more to really get a good effect IMO,,,, but your humor makes up for it,,, for now.

Best of luck, favourited your stuff and looking forward to seing more in the future!

[World Of The Line in one]

is this really necessary?

I don't mind you guys having this series and all, in fact I actually would encourage you guys to make more, just the problem that I'm having is the fact that,,, this seems like a resubmit to me in a way because it's really just a mass copy of all your other WOTL stuff. It's questionable as to whether I should blow the whistle on this or not, I'm not going to but just a forewarning that it might not be a great idea to do these kind of "compilation" of stuff you've already submitted, if you can see what I'm saying.

Other than that as far as judging the movie goes, the quality is pretty rough in all honesty. FBF with this style can either be really good or really bad, you have the whole bad-erase-style that I hate, if you're going to do this I suggest smoothing corners so it doesn't look like you're just erasing with a straight line, it'll create a smoother look. Another thing is the fact that when you're drawing a longer line it looks like hell because you can see each frame where you used a oversized brush to extend the line. I'm guessing you're doing this all with a mouse so I'd also suggest you get a wacom and use the pressure feature,,, you can make a reallllly smooth look with it, if you wanna see an example PM me and I'll send you a link.

Anyways best of luck and just keep in mind the whole resubmit rule in the future, you are very close to the line on this one.

GlueyMcGee responds:

im not on the line because it is not at all the same as only one of my vids
and it doesnt break any rules!! (I haven't stolen it ,its not alicious and its not unsuitable)

[The Library Party]

LOLLLL

This has been on my favourites for a while but I forgot I never reviewed it,,, this is friggen hilarious man, you should make more messed up stuff like this!

BadBoyMcCoy responds:

More coming your way my friend, look at my website for all my latest stuff

www.cianmccoy.com

I prefer making flash there, because I can make lots of shorts and no one complains.

Thanks for the review mate, glad you liked it

[Facts o Life Plx]

awful

terrible sync to music, graphics were sub par, and everything else except the "BOATS N HOES" joke was terrible.

Please try again tho.

Whatsthisyellowbox responds:

lol rofl lol noob fag lol

[RBF - Beer Collab]

lol i watched this for like 2 hours while drinking

last night was a good night i tell you what,,, sweet song, one of my favourites for sure, well done guys!

Cheektoghetto responds:

Remember, I in no way condone underage drinking, however, I find it find it fun as hell.

[Mosaic Fast Painting]

that wasn't so fast

nope

www-kaywire-com responds:

right....

[Gordon Green - Pilot Ep.]

well, I'll give you a few things to work on.

It was alright man but theres definitely a few things you could work on, but first lemmie just say i liked the fact that it was clean looking, thats always a bonus.

things to work on tho I'd fix the music, it was annoying, idk if you're intentionally aiming for a silent movie with bubbles but typically I hate reading movies (not saying that everyone feels that way, but personally). Also length, i read the comments don't worry so I got that covered but definitely needs more length. Lastly, STORYLINE, that wasn't very interesting to be completely honest, spice er' up a bit, fix the music, add some length and I think you might have something enjoyable.

Good luck to you

[I don't have one yet]

nice stuff

good style, keep workin.

Whatsthisyellowbox responds:

lol rofl lol noob fag lol

[Ya Got Me!]

I turned it off.

I'm sorry but I can't stand to watch a tween over and over, I'm not sure if you had any other content after the tweened hands but I couldn't stand to watch anymore.

I suggest you either add more if thats all you had seing as the graphics were somewhat bearable but if that IS all it is, you really need to work on that man. If there was more I appologize for turning it off and I hope you understand why I did this, I give you a 2 simply for the fact that it sounded like you were working all day for newgrounds. reps for that m8

uglyslug responds:

Hehe, you people sound so cool when you say "m8"