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Job: Web/Game design
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You made the same mistake the other helicopter game did, you don't have hitTest points you just have it hitTest the main helicopter which makes it so you can barely miss things but still get hit because it's hitting the box around it.
Basically make a few points on the helicopter if you don't know how although you really should then PM me and re-submit, alright game other than that tho.
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"I liked the phony secret clip better >:/"
LOL, when I clicked everything and the "Secret clip" started, I was actually expecting something different than what happens before you say "Just kidding" but damn that was actually the funniest looking thing I've ever seen, I liked it better than the real secret clip.
ANYWAYS, heres some input:
++ Nice smooth graphics, outlines were done nicely but still small!
++ Music was clear and well timed to the animation
++ Added some interactivity to it to make watching this cartoon a challenge, great idea, not many people do it but after watching this I wish more people did!
-- The cow was hard to click, I'm not going to ruin it for everyone and for you because I know how it feels when people give away cheats to my games, but it was well disguised!
-- You can't get back to view the secret clip after you shut it off, you have to do all the clickity clicking again, the save script is very easy if you want any help with that I would be more than happy to help!
Extra comment: My site, Lifemadelazy, is looking for content to host a copy of on our site and if you read this and woudln't object to allowing my site to host a copy I would be honored!
Good job,
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At least now I can compare to mine and make sure it's not the same, and by the looks of it, mine is MUCH different :D same style tho, I really like how this game was designed except for the walking, it was a bit glitchy but I'm sure what you did had a point to it like not walking in diagonals.
It was very solid, I think that you could have made each walking section a bit bigger, mine follows the guy for a bit and then switches to reduce lag!
Nice weapon stuff, that was well made, easy but effective script in that section, much enjoyed here!
Smart how you made a mix of Birds eye and Side scrolling view, so it's not quite either, I enjoyed that as well, added a nice 3D-ish style!
Music was alright, the intro kinda turned me off because it was soo good to begin with, the "screech" completely made my eyes open wide cuz it didn't fit,,, if you had turned the volume on the music down on that section as the guy started talking, might have looked a bit better.
Overall, the only things I had a problem with were the walking style and the intro sounds. Other than that this is a very solid game and I hope to see it on front page!
Congrats
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Author's Response:
Hey, good to hear from you again Paragon'! I initially intended the game to be playable in the PSP browser (which it is, until it runs out of RAM), which is why I used static screens instead of a scrolling environment.
I appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback, and look forward to playing your game when it's done.
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Thing I hate about this tho, I'm making a game right now, called Oak Falls, and it has the same style of graphics, and the name is similar, and when I release mine everyone is going to think I copied you >:/ and I already have a sponsor and all!
Sux, but I can't wait to try your game none the less!
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Author's Response:
Sorry dude. Looks like I beat you to the punch. No sponsor yet, but my game is complete.
Still, I look forward to seeing your work as well! Please PM me when it's online.
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"Great game, a change from draw-play but still good"
Enjoyed the game, glad you fixed the third level!!! Now I can beat it =D Great job man, keep up the good work, looking forward to your future games!
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"Another great submission by sunsneezer"
Wow man, you are surprisingly talented! I didn't even know you had this movie in the works cuz you never talk about flash! GREAT job man, catchy tune, GREAT graphics along with a great idea to top everything off.
Congrats on front page and daily fourth! Sorry I couldn't review sooner, got a lot on the go currently.
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I liked this game, well made, should have a higher score tho, maybe it would be better if you worked on some of the bombs/things that the enemies shoot at you, they're too basic,,, could have been a lot more effective other than that it was an effective game, well enjoyed, great job hope to see more from you
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um, it REALLY glitched out for me,,, the ball got stuck over top of the "asian nerd" a bunch of times and the ball was never retured to me :s oh well, nicely looking game, with a little work it could be great
My suggestions:
Work on graphics
Work on gameplay (make it faster and more exciting with something to make the game original)
Layout
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Author's Response:
It glitches out for everyone but thats why theres a glitch fix button called emergency restart.
I do need to work on graphics.
I did work on gameplay, its mad fast, and the life and funny opponents is what makes it original.
The layout was designed to be like an 8bit video game.
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I loved this,,, at first I was expecting some random music video with corny music but i was wrong,,, this is hilarious!! loved it!! make more !!!1
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++ well made, highscores worked well, enjoyed the game play,,,
-- Annoying music, the rollover sound on the mouse and buttons
good luck in the contest, you have a good enough score to keep you in it with only 2 days left,,, watch out, other people in the contest have been voting 0 on each others games i suspect,,, because everyones games scores have been going down rapidly (i check every day to see what position I'm in)
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Author's Response:
Ya ive noticed that to. its sorta sad really. but i dont think score matters at all. itll just be what they think is better. only requirement i saw was over 1000views was needed.
thanks for the review.
goodluck in the contest
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